I loved to read comics, always thinking that, to be a superhero, you had to have special powers. I first excerised my 'superpowers' one August day...
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A small, flamboyant girl was standing in the the street, giving a performance to her dolls. I noted that a convertible was speeding towards her at an alarming pace. Not sure she would notice in time, I ran, tackling the girl, so she landed on the sidewalk.
"You're my hero!" The girl exclaimed, true adoration in her eyes. I realized that super powers aren't what make a superhero. It's the desire to help others.
I really like you story and your meaning to it. I also like the way you change it up with telling us that they spoke it was like she exclaimed.
ReplyDeleteI think you don't really need the August in your story because I think it will not affect anything. I like the words you used for your story and I also like the meaning of it. Good job in your story !
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your story. I like how you have a big idea/message that the character in your story realized. Again good choice of words to tell your story and well done editing and revising for grammar and sentence fluency.
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